THEME 1: NATURE
The following excerpt from “There was a Child went Forth” will be followed by a “List Poem” by Classes 5-303 and 5-302, entered one line at a time as “Comments” to this blog post.
Click the title of this post (Whitman List Poem, Theme 1: Nature) and scroll down to read through our list of poetry lines.
Excerpt from Walt Whitman’s There was a Child went Forth with a nature theme.
THERE was a child went forth every day;
And the first object he look’d upon, that object he became;
And that object became part of him for the day, or a certain part of the day, or for many years, or stretching cycles of years.
The early lilacs became part of this child,
And grass, and white and red morning-glories, and white and red clover, and the song of the phoebe-bird,
And the Third-month lambs, and the sow’s pink-faint litter, and the mare’s foal, and the cow’s calf,
And the noisy brood of the barn-yard, or by the mire of the pond-side,
And the fish suspending themselves so curiously below there—and the beautiful curious liquid,
And the water-plants with their graceful flat heads—all became part of him.
The field-sprouts of Fourth-month and Fifth-month became part of him;
Winter-grain sprouts, and those of the light-yellow corn, and the esculent roots of the garden,
And the apple-trees cover’d with blossoms, and the fruit afterward, and wood-berries, and the commonest weeds by the road;
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THERE was a child went forth every day;
And the noisy brood of the barn-yard, or by the mire of the pond-side,
I see a bush of all whole bunch of lady bugs orangeish,redish with black spots.baby ladybugs and adult ones too.
Kimberly, 5-303
The fish swims, hoping to get the bread crumbs, not wanting the other fishes to get it. Like hungry foxes fighting over a dead rabbit.
Simon, 5-303
In Prospect Park the ground feels like a bed, the grass so smooth like a feather, and once it’s pulled out, it goes far away not knowing where would it go.
Sylvia, 5-303
The motion of the water was like a boat rocking back and
fourth back and fourth. Every time I got deeper into the
oceanit felt as if someone was grabbing my ankels to
go foward.
Kaitlyn, 5-303
When you walk to the mountains you see less people and more wilderness, animals, and plants.
Manuel, 5-303
The first thing I saw was little chicks and a mom chicken,they were running around like they were playng tag.
Aylin, 5-303
I feel the wind hitting me.I see the moon rising and give me a good night sleep.
Jordan, 5-303
I saw thousands of flowers with bees trying to get honey.Then I saw more flowers like sunflowers, daisys, roses, tulips… There was a purple flower that smelled like lavender.
Natalie, 5-303
I was in the park walking down a path and saw a small round chipmunk the color of dead leaves.
Oscar, 5-303
Its getting cold .
The leaves are falling of the trees.
They fall in slow in slow motion.
Angela, 5-303
The leaves flickering to side, to side, again and again.
Ashley, 5-303
When I see roses they remind me of my heart.
I see little dogs wearing their clothes.
When I see dandilions,they remind me of the honey bees and all of their own honey.
When it gets dark in the park,I could see stars and the shiny full moon.
Veronica, 5-503
Water moves swiftly and camly through the sea like a rocking chair. The water is cold and wet.
James, 5-303
At the zoo I see baby tigers sleepping in a flat ball by their mom’s side and the mom in a quarter-shaped moon around her cubs.
Kristian, 5-303
Looking at nature is wonderful
Looking at the clouds full of happiness.
Elizabeth, 5-303
In the park i see a pond that has rocks init that look like
little frozen fishes
Leslie, 5-303
The trunk was big and cylinder and brown. When you looked
up all you saw was branches and green leaves.
Jason, 5-303
I see the water going down slowly and leaves falling down. In the water I see the moving slowly. Brids singing lowly and the sun shining so happy
Lorena, 5-303
Nature is a wonderful gift thing full of animals and plants
Farrah, 5-302
I look up at the sky and I see a beautiful blue
sky, birds, and also white clouds and also green trees.
Hyat, 5-302
Nature is a wonderful gift.
Farrah, 5-302
I feel the wind in my hair it’s like if my my hair came a live and started danceing with the wind.
Yenibel, 5-302
The water shinslike a Dimond
When I go to Red Hook I see trees and leaves
Red, yellow, brown, green all those beautiful colors I see when I ride my bike.
Carol, 5-302
I see a tree fillied with wonderful animals entering the world I see new faces born it’s like magic I was so realaxed from my bueatiful sight.
Christy, 5-302
I’m on my bike I feel as if I’m in space
then I see a beatuful apple tree.
Ulices, 5-302
Then they lose to us and we think we won the World Cup and they are crying because they lost the World Cup
Marco, 5-302
When I go camping with
my family I
like rolling
down the
hill with my
2 dogs
Justin, 5-302
when I go to school it feels like a safe place ever since my dad moved and I felt alone but i still get to see him in summer and on vacations.
Axel 5-302
I ride my bike, it looks like driving a car.
Jorge, 5-302
The water shins like a Dimond.
Carely 5-302
The water shinslike a Dimond
I love to go to Yellow stone national park, to
watch old faithful(a guyser)
Or watch the animals graze.
Rebecca, 5-302
When I went to Pennsylvania I saw my cousin and
ancestors.
Edgard, 5-302
Taking family pictures going on family vacations
to L.A. or Mexico to see my grandmas and
grandpas going to ride rollercoasters going to
Las Vegas and then we have to leave
Jimmy, 5-302
I love to go on the monkey bars, (they are
sometimes hard to handle.
Summer, 5-302
The park is somewhere for kids to enjoy
Farrah, 5-302
I like basketball’
its like all things
It makes me want to sing and dance.
Abraham ps.45
I wake up in the morning, clear blue shy, with sun shining very happily.
I also see lots of beautiful insects like ladybugs, catapillars,
grasshoppers and bees, with the colors of green, red, black and yellow.
Alyssa, 5-304
I like to be doing something else other than being home all day. I wish I could go, to nature the clean air, seeing stars, telling storys. Such great place to be.
Alex 4-308
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