5TH GRADE FAMILY LIST POEM
The following excerpt from “There was a Child went Forth” will be followed by a “List Poem” by Classes 5-303 and 5-302, entered one line at a time as “Comments” to this blog post.
Click the title of this post (Whitman List Poem, Theme 3: Family) and scroll down to read through our list of poetry lines.

Excerpt from Walt Whitman’s There was a Child went Forth with a family theme.
His own parents,
He that had father’d him, and she that had conceiv’d him in her womb, and birth’d him,
They gave this child more of themselves than that;
They gave him afterward every day—they became part of him.
The mother at home, quietly placing the dishes on the supper-table;
The mother with mild words—clean her cap and gown, a wholesome odor falling off her person and clothes as she walks by;
The father, strong, self-sufficient, manly, mean, anger’d, unjust;
The blow, the quick loud word, the tight bargain, the crafty lure,
The family usages, the language, the company, the furniture—the yearning and swelling heart,
Affection that will not be gainsay’d—the sense of what is real—the thought if, after all, it should prove unreal,
The doubts of day-time and the doubts of night-time—the curious whether and how,
Whether that which appears so is so, or is it all flashes and specks?
Filed under: Mr. Flickinger's Class, Mr. Marsano's Class 06-07, Poetry


I saw my brother,my mom,and my dad and they were holding a cake that said “Happy Birthday”.
My mom is always working I hardly see her. My dad is such a fun guy and a worker.
Jordan, 5-303
Family and pets are a gift to have. It is a special thing to have in the whole wide world.
Sylvia, 5-303
My mom is always working I hardly see her. My dad is such a fun guy and a worker.
Jordan, 5-303
When I fall asleep I dream about monsters the monsters were my brothers. I have such a sweet and
kind sister she is as sweet and kind as chocolate.
Leslie, 5-303
My family is small. My mom, dad, grandma, sister, and me. My dad is tall and skinny like an adult snake. And my mom, sister ,and my grandma is about two inches taller than me.
Simon 5-303
My dog who is a female dog who is a female dog who is only 3 years old, she smells like a pig when she doesn’t take a bath.
Kimberly
5-303
But I love all of them,they’re so wonderfull.
Elizabeth 5-303
My brother is so annoying.
He jumps up and down and all around.
Once he starts there’s no stoping him.
Angela, 5-303
Don’t even start with my dad.He is so strong.He is even stronger then a lion.And my house is like a zoo with alot of animals.
My home has some elbow room. It smells like spring. I have a mom nice and clear. I have a sister smart and educated. I have a cat fearless and brave. My brother is mean and annoying. My dad is strong and strict.
james 5-303
But I love all of them, they’re so wonderfull.
Elizabeth 5-303
Don’t even start with my dad.He is so strong.He is even stronger then a lion.My house is like a zoo with alot of animals.
Manuel,5-303
When I go home I see my cat that is brown, white, and black. She is not a baby, but she is 1 year and a half old. Some time at night she comes on my bed and sleeps at my side in a half shaped moon my sister’s cat name is Baby.
Kristian,5-303
My family is close to my heart. They seem like I don’t mind my business but they still love me.
Ashley, 5-303
My grandfather’s chin is so hairy their like
neadles. My mom’s hair is so shiney it’s like
the hot sun.
Jason, 5-303
When I close my eyes I think my family is in my heart and dreaming of them and having fun in the park playing around and they still love me.
Lorena, 5-303
My brother acts tough around his friends but sometimes cries when my mom yells at him
Oscar,5-303
My family is big it has 5 people. We always have fun. My family likes being together and playing lots of games at home. My brother takes me places, my sister plays with me, my mom gives me things and my sister and brother are sweet, but sometimes annoying. I love my family.
Alyssa, 5-303
The hair on my dads chin is like needels going through my
finger tips.
kaitllyn, 5-303
In the school yard we all run to to get a spot for dodgeball
Yenibel,5-302
I mostly like farrah because she use them like
like as if they were telling her emotion.
Carol, 5-302
Carol,
I erased your email address before I published your comment.
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Mr. Rhys, TMS
My house is always full of giggles,they call us the laughing family.
Farrah,5-302
My dad is strong like a machine and a dinosaur
Hyat 5-302
My home
Smeells like baked cookies
When my mom is making them
Mayra,5-302
My cousin runs after everybody trying to hit us with
her belt.
Jeremy
Class 5-302
I see two wonderful dogs waiting to get their tummmy rubbed makes them feel like there is no place like home they never want to leave.
Christy, 5-302
When I go home I see my sister smiling with joy, I run up to her and kiss her on her cheek.
Yenibel,5-302
I went to Pennsylvania I saw my cousins and ancestors.I play b-ball with my cousin and he always beet me and he is eighteen
Edgard, 5-302
When I go home I can see that my mom is cleaning so I go up to her, and I help her.
Jennifer, 5-302
I imagine what would happen if my house burned
down. The only thing I would be sure of is that
I would be really sad.
Ulices 5-302
I hear my brother and sister laughing like laughing hyenas.
Carely 5-302
I play with my sister then we play with my xbox and then if I made a GOAL i am happy because I made a goal.
Marco 5-302
My brother is allways in his room listening to reggeton,and making me watch him dance while my mom is telling him to lower the volume.
Summer 5-302
When I wake up my dogs jump on me
and I have to greet them to get them off of me.
Justin, 5-302
I really like how you wrote your comment. you wrote
it with expertion.
Jeremy
Class 5-302
When my dad talks it sound like a lion roaring.
Carely 5-302
I really like how Christy wrote your comment.She wrote
it with expression.
Jeremy
Class 5-302
I love my familly, I guess.
REBECCA
5-302